Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some
individuals
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hold the view that students should cover the cost of their
education
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on their own
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of arguing that it is the responsibility of the government. I partly agree with
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opinion because I believe that certain people should pay for high
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by themselves.
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, some
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make incredible efforts to study and are passionate about becoming real professionals which is why, I believe, they deserve to get high a degree for free.
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with, there is
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a kind of people who will not value an opportunity to acquire a degree for zero cost because they might take it for granted.
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, a study has shown that people tend to value things more if they buy them for their own money.
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,
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individuals
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who are not able to appreciate the opportunity should pay the tuition fee by themselves and use it as an incentive to be a decent student.
On the other hand
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, students who work hard since primary school should have their tuition fees covered by officials.
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of all, it is beneficial for the government to have qualified professionals so that they could develop the country and benefit the economy by paying taxes.
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, nordic countries
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as Denmark and Finland provide free high-quality
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for their citizens.
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, there is a low rate of unemployment. Even though the taxes are quite high the population have no objections because
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'
education
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and medicine are free and of good quality. In conclusion,
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it is impossible to make high
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completely free students should at least have an opportunity to get it thanks to their tremendous efforts because, in essence, they are future contributors to the economy and
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the government should be interested in the prosperity of the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bear the cost
  • tuition fees
  • financial management
  • taxpayer burden
  • public finances
  • allocate resources
  • social inequality
  • socio-economic disparities
  • access to higher education
  • long-term economic benefits
  • educated workforce
  • earning potentials
  • investment vs expense
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