In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

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are a means for
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people
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to get out
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from their monotonous lives. It is sad but true that
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have lost their methods and the essence of celebration these days. There are several impacts
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is causing on the behaviour and relationship of the families.
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, a few
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can be provided to tackle the situation. The foremost problem is that lack of celebration
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from each other. On the festival
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families
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gathered
at one's place, share happiness,
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, ate various types of sweets. To add to
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, it is a way of strengthening the bond between loved ones.
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, nowadays there is no medium or reason for
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people
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to share
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special moments with their friends,
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grandparents
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and cousins.
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, in India before,
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did many things and overjoyed the tradition to the fullest. In
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recent times, they only
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their houses and chill at their homes on mobile phones. Despite
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, several remedies can bring up to reduce the impact of the scenarios. The major cause is that citizens are not aware of the traditions, and
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avert the celebrations.
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, the government can organise the
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campaigns
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to aware the modern generation about the benefits of celebrating
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together.
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could ignite
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excitement amongst the youth and extend the willingness to celebrate the
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with proper rituals. To add to
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providing
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fascinating
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content on
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social media regarding the celebration
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a few days
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that particular festival, would contribute to
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the importance of
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in day-to-day life. To conclude the discussion, it has been largely noticed that
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are not interested in any kind of public celebrations, which establishes
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weaken
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and
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society.
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, some steps can be taken to reverse the situation, which
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more and more information must spread among the society about
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of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traditional festivals
  • heritage
  • cultural identity
  • folklore
  • cultural tourism
  • intergenerational
  • homogenization
  • commercialization
  • intangible cultural heritage
  • community engagement
  • awareness
  • revitalize
  • cultural diversity
  • educational programs
  • governmental support
  • logistical support
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