Nowadays, there are more and more apartment buildings. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?

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In the meantime, technic is more developed so
apartment
blocks
are raised easier.
Apartment
blocks
are erected in a great number. In my opinion,
this
has more weaknesses than profits that I mentioned in
this
eassay. On the one hand, many
apartment
buildings have a large space for the population to stay. Big cities have many
people
studying or working, the result is crowed population and erect
apartment
blocks
can solve
this
problem. Addition, normal house price is nine times as high as
apartment
blocks
so
people
have low income can purchase them
instead
of a normal house.
For instance
, the reseach of Hanoi Civil Engeneering university in 2021 shows that an
apartment
block has about 450 households and 4
apartment
blocks
have a population equal to 1 ward.
On the other hand
, a large number of
apartment
bulidings have bad affects an infrastructure. In the same square,
apartment
blocks
have more residents than normal house which lead to the use energy as well ass space for
people
such
as: school, park, roads, ...
For example
. LVL street has about 50
apartment
buildings and it makes
this
place always suffers from traffic jame.
Moreover
, raising more
apartment
blocks
makes the pollution worse.
People
consume much energy like: foods, water, ... so the garbage is not handled intime. In conclusion,
although
there are many
apartment
blocks
to live in, the two drawbacks are burden infrastructure and pollution. The goverment can make new policies to control
this
problem.
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