Some people feel that children should be educated in single sex schools; others argue that mixed schools are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

the vast majority of

people

think that students thought be educated in single sec schools. other whilst, that co-

education

education

schools are ideal.

I'

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I strongly disagree

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m

strongly disagree with

this

statement.The trend of

this

essay is to view both sides and give your perspective view. In my perspective, few

people

think that children should be educated of the same gender.

Firstly

, I would like to highlight the factor of doing studies in same gender schools that their minds never distracted by the beauty.

In other words

,

people

think that boys are given less preference to study because of girls.

For instance

, in the modern era, It is quite a normal thing of having relationships in

department

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. In

America

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90 % of students are in relationships with different age groups.

Moreover

,

people

believe that studying

in

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with

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the same gender is a better choice. because

people

think that

in

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apply

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single-

sexsex

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sex sex

boys used to play the game like

men

and

women

.

on the other hand

,

i'mI'

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I'm I'm

M

disagree with sex-single

Education

so I'

m

supporting the idea of studying co-

education

education

. because both genders can build

confidence

in

their self

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themself

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.

In other words

,

men

and

women

are having less

confidence

but studying in the mix can gain some

confidence

from it.

For example

, I have done my o level's from city school in co-

educationschooling

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education schooling

so Now I'

m

confident to talk to every woman in my workplace.

furthermore

, there

is

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are

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more benefits of studying in the mixed genders because both

also

learn discipline and the way they have to

behaviour

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behave

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in front of opposite genders.most public

men

and

women

does

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do

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not know how they have to react in front of them.To illustrate,

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according

to according

toaccording

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according

the social research

people

say that mixed

education

is better for admission. to sum up, the vast majority of

community

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the community

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think

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thinks

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that separate sex is considered for students ,but others think that

opposite

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the opposite

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sex is better for

education

because

men

and

women

can build

confidence

and

also

learn discipline as well.