Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
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Dear Enrolment Officer,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. The main reason for writing this
letter is to seek your permission to enroll
in a computer Change the spelling
enrol
course
. I am studying mechanical engineering at this
college, but I am always interested in doing a computer course
.
Furthermore
, nowadays everything is somehow related to computing, I just read about a course
in the college magazine, and I wanted to participate in it. Because I came from a different background, I never had a chance to complete any elementary course
in computing, but I always tried to learn basic skills from my friends who took computer science and engineering, and also
from online resources. I think these skills would be sufficient to understand an advanced-level course
.
Moreover
, According to
the magazine people who have completed an elementary course
can only apply for the course
I am interested in. So, I would be very grateful if you give me an exception, and provide me the opportunity to enroll in this
course
. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Srinivas Varma.Submitted by varmaib1 on
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structure
Ensure that your letter is clearly structured, dividing it into paragraphs each dealing with a separate point. This structure generally is evident, but further delineation between the explanation of your background and your specific request may enhance clarity.
cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices to link your ideas more smoothly. While your letter flows reasonably well, more varied connectors and a clearer progression of ideas from general interest to a specific request would strengthen coherence.
task completion
Your task response is competent, but including specific examples of your self-taught skills or how they apply to the course could strengthen your argument. Make sure the extent of your interest and any relevant experience is clear, to fully meet the task requirements.
tone
Maintain a polite and respectful tone, which you've done well. However, to elevate your writing, consider incorporating more sophisticated expressions of request and gratitude, enhancing the formality where appropriate for written requests.