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Individuals and countries cannot help everyone who needs help in the world, so they should only be concerned about their own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#individuals #countries #world #communities
There has been a lot of discussion revolving around the issue of helping
others
. Some
people
 believe that they and their
countries
 should help
others
 in need abroad, while another part of society thinks that efforts should only be put to help local communities and
countries
. Personally, I am in favour of the view that encourages to assist
others
 internationally.
To begin
 with, aid to social groups in need abroad makes
people
 broaden their mindset towards the world.
For instance
, travelling to Africa on a mission to build new schools and teach children lets the person learn new traditions, way of life in other than native country, and even significant skills,
such
 as a new language. All that leads to a better understanding of different
people
 and cultures,
thus
 turning the helper
to
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 a more respectful and intelligent person. Another considerable advantage of supporting
others
 beyond the borders of the home country is getting appreciation and respect.
For example
, from the beginning of the war in Ukraine,
Lithuanian
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 government, municipalities, NGOs and residents have donated millions of euros as humanitarian and military aid. The European Union, as well as its
countries
 and Ukraine, see the effort as a shining example of diplomacy;
therefore
, if anything happens in Lithuania, its citizens will be calm that they will receive the needed cooperation. To conclude, helping
people
 and
countries
 internationally is a way to self-development and international recognition.
Therefore
, everyone should put effort to not only watch themselves
,
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 but
also
 to see what is happening abroad and how they can be beneficial.
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