You have been offered a scholarship for obtaining a distance Master's degree through distance learning at a prestigious university. One of the requirements is to take a test on site once a month. Write a letter to your current employer.In your letter: • Share the news. • Explain how this will be helpful. • Ask for permission to be absent. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………..,

Dear Mr Brook I am delighted to inform you that I applied application for MBA at Waterloo Univesity through distance learning and they have
also
provided me 10,000 dollars scholarship for the course.As you know
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work for
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finance
fincance
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the fincance
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department so
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have
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chosen
choose
chosed
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chosen
major
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in Finance in
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International
Business.
Moreover
,
this
course will be helping me out in many ways as it will
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provide certification in product management and digital marketing tools which will help in my current job to assist the company with ongoing projects. I know you will be worried about my study-work-life balance.
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I can manage in a proper way while I need a big favour from you as I need to go in person to take the exam at the end of every month meanwhile I am ready to work on weekends to manage the workload. I firmly believe that you will understand my situation and make an exception while my course continues. Yours faithfully, zn
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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