People's opinion differs as to whether schooling at the
of 7 or at an early
is more advantageous. Personally, I agree with the latter point of view.
Those who argue that pupils should be sent to
at a later
have their reasons.
, it helps in the better development of the student's brain.
is because when the
play with their friends at home freely without any stress it helps their
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to develop better.
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the
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and achievers rise from these
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, it helps in the development of a better person.
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they learn the
to distinguish between right and wrong by learning many examples from their old ones at home.
, I sided with those who feel that
should start going to
at a very early
. One reason is that at a young
the learning
of the student is very good, one can mould young ones in any direction they want. So the
to grab more knowledge will help the pupil to excel in comparison to the other late joiners.
, In
like India
are sent to education institutes at a young
would help to compete better with the same
group in other
. Another reason is that they will learn how to live in
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society with other pupils.
is because when they go to
they will learn how to behave with other mates at
. They will learn sharing of things
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and food with their friends. They will learn a variety of cultures from the other pupils.
will
develop a sense of equality between all religions and cultures, which helps to develop a better nation
In conclusion, while there are reasons to believe that young ones should be sent to schools at
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because of their better learning
and the
to live with other mates their
.