Some believe that children should start school after the age of 7 while others think that school should begin from a very young age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People's opinion differs as to whether schooling at the
age
of 7 or at an early
age
is more advantageous. Personally, I agree with the latter point of view. Those who argue that pupils should be sent to
school
at a later
age
have their reasons.
Firstly
, it helps in the better development of the student's brain.
This
is because when the
children
play with their friends at home freely without any stress it helps their
mind
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to develop better.
For example
, In foreign
countries
like
,
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USA
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the
children
start
school
at a later
age
and
as a result
of
this
most
scientist
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and achievers rise from these
countries
.
Secondly
, it helps in the development of a better person.
This
is because when mentees
spends
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most of their time with their grandparents and parents, where he/she will learn many moral and social things from them. They can learn about their culture ,
also
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they learn the
ability
to distinguish between right and wrong by learning many examples from their old ones at home.
However
, I sided with those who feel that
children
should start going to
school
at a very early
age
. One reason is that at a young
age
the learning
ability
of the student is very good, one can mould young ones in any direction they want. So the
ability
to grab more knowledge will help the pupil to excel in comparison to the other late joiners.
For example
, In
countries
like India
children
are sent to education institutes at a young
age
would help to compete better with the same
age
group in other
countries
. Another reason is that they will learn how to live in
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society with other pupils.
This
is because when they go to
school
they will learn how to behave with other mates at
school
. They will learn sharing of things
,
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and food with their friends. They will learn a variety of cultures from the other pupils.
This
will
also
develop a sense of equality between all religions and cultures, which helps to develop a better nation In conclusion, while there are reasons to believe that young ones should be sent to schools at
age
of 7, my own view is that mentees should be sent to schools at
early
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age
because of their better learning
ability
and the
ability
to live with other mates their
age
.
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  • emotional development
  • cognitive development
  • play-based learning
  • creativity
  • problem-solving skills
  • social skills
  • cooperation
  • communication
  • structured environment
  • learning disabilities
  • developmental delays
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