Plastic is destroying the natural ecosystem in the ocean. What are the problems associated with this issues and what are the possible solutions?

Goods made from
plastic
now are destroying the environment in the oceans.
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the natural ecosystem and how sorting, recycling and sending rubbish into space will help
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our planet`s environment. The
first
problem
is toxic fumes that appear when
plastic
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corrupt
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. Harmful gases which
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from
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process pollute the atmosphere and bane organisms that can breathe, videlicet all
macroorganisms
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. The
second
problem
is increasing the area of landfills.
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not only marine organisms getting injured. Of the 265 recorded bird species entangled in
plastic
debris, at least 147 species were marine, according to the United Nations. Birds get caught in nets and die, unable to get out, or become easy prey for other animals. But these problems have
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solutions. The solution for the
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problem
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it
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price. The resolution is to send debris into the planet`s orbit. The
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of the
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obliquely
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related
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the
first
problem
. The solution is common, collect and sort rubbish for
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further
recycling. Today about 60
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tones
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of
plastic
are getting recycled in the world. I think it is clear that we need just to sort
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waste that we produce and
then
natural ecosystems will restore eventually.
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