The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps provide information about an industrial site in Norbiton and planned changes to it.
Overall
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, it is easily apparent that there will be significant variations
on
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the town. An increase has been suffered by the number of houses
as well as
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the
quantity
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of facilities
such
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as shops,
school
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schools
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,
playground
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playgrounds
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or
a
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medical
center
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centers
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. One of the most significant changes that maps illustrated is the construction of a
rotunde
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rotunda
and a bridge in the
center
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of the town. The bridge will be located in the north,
while
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the traffic circle will be built in the south. Another important feature of the future landscape is the growth of housing and the surge of different facilities. New roads will be developed and new connections will be made between them.
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, they will make a decision to locate the stores next to the medical
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and the playground next to the school on the east side of Norbinton.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • site
  • current
  • proposed
  • expand
  • facilities
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • roads
  • business park
  • airport
  • size
  • layout
  • comparisons
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