You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his petformance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Mr Smith, I am Nikhil Dhaygude and I am writing to you to show my appreciation for your singing talent. I attended your concert held in Bangalore on the 15th of September and was mesmerised by your voice.
Firstly
, I must confess that I was not aware of you, but after attending the concert, I have become a great admirer of yours. Your singing reminds me of the great singers of the past, like Elvis Presley and Frank Sinatra. You have a unique quality of deep baritone voice and very good high-pitch notes. To be honest, I am a singer myself, having trained in classical music at the Carnatic institute of India. I am a regular performer at club and corporate events. I have
also
started learning western music, to increase my repertoire.
However
, I want to become like you, someone who enthrals audiences at concerts. I would be extremely grateful if you could provide me guidance on how to become a big-stage performer. Eagerly awaiting your response. Yours sincerely, Nikhil Dhaygude.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • captivating
  • stellar performance
  • entranced
  • musical prowess
  • virtuoso
  • encore
  • melodic
  • harmony
  • instrumental skills
  • musical journey
  • mentorship
  • aspiring
  • collaboration
  • feedback
  • inspired
  • invaluable guidance
  • musical aspirations
  • appreciation
  • influenced
  • répertoire
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