You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Artem Altukhov and I am a student of the Computer science course which is starting in September. I was instructed to reach you and discuss the details of my temporary apartment. The bottom line is that I am relocating from Montreal and the problem is that I will not have any place to live. As I understood, the college can assist with finding a unit. If it is still relevant, I would like to share a list of what I will need.

First

, it would be perfect to have a stable internet connection, since my work will depend on it.

Second

, if it was possible, I would prefer to live alone.

Finally

, I hope we will be some available buildings not far from the centre of Greenmount. I am arriving on August, 29th, please let me know if it is possible to deal with the issue by that time. Yours faithfully, Artem Altukhov.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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