Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their family. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether kids should spend all their available
time
with their near and dears or not is the disputed issue. Spending Use synonyms
time
with their family will aid them to inculcate the core values and they do have the bonding with their Use synonyms
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however
, they will not have exposure to the outside world which is necessary for the overall development of any individual, Linking Words
thus
both sides have their pros and cons as perused Linking Words
further
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To commence, it goes without saying that the Linking Words
parents
are the best teachers and no other than them can take interest in one's child's development, Use synonyms
hence
they are the prime authority under whom younger ones can have more learning opportunities. Linking Words
For instance
, the Linking Words
parents
will provide them with all the resources essential for their growth. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, when adolescents live in the house during their spare Linking Words
time
, they will learn cultural values, moral values and their past roots, Use synonyms
for example
, their grandparents could educate them by telling stories, playing with them etc. Linking Words
Hence
, the younger generation will be connected with the grassroots of their culture and they will be emotionally connected with their family, Linking Words
therefore
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this
will aid in the reduction of old age homes, as they will not let them away from their Linking Words
parents
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On the contrary
, if kids allocate all their Linking Words
time
to their progenitors Use synonyms
then
they will not get exposure to the outside world, Linking Words
consequently
, their learning will be limited to a few people only, Linking Words
moreover
, they will not socialize and become introverts. To exemplify, they will not be able to play with their friends, Linking Words
hence
some adeptness like teamwork and helping each other will not be developed which are required for overall growth. In their spare Linking Words
time
, they can learn new skills from the outside world like sports, singing, art, dancing, swimming and many more, but they will be restricted to their house and lose the opportunity to learn other skills.
In conclusion, in my opinion, it is amply clear that the Use synonyms
parents
are the best teachers and they will inculcate many things by sparing Use synonyms
time
with them, but they as well need to go out to acquire other important skills and get their holistic development.Use synonyms
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