You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear Mr Sharma, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am your neighbour Jatinder living in the house

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to yours.

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week we had a get-together at our place,which was to celebrate my father's 60th birthday. In order to surprise ,him all the family members prepared a special dance to

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few of his favourite songs. During that in-house celebration we played loud music,but later I found out that it was very disturbing for the neighbours including you.

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, I want to apologise for the inconvenience caused by us. I am well aware of your medical condition and that you are a heart patient and you needed a good sleep during those hours. In the

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I feel sorry and I assure you that

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won't happen again in future and if we plan anything of

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sort, I would personally come to you to let you know . Looking forward to hearing from you Yours lovingly,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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161 words

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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