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Some people feel that it is difficult to do a public speech or presentation. Therefore, it is a good idea for children to learn to do speeches as early as possible. What is the importance of public speech in life? Do you agree or disagree that children should be taught public speaking skill at school?

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It is believed
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some
people
 that,
communication
skills
such
 as delivering a speech in public should be trained at
school
. I totally agree with the above statement and the following essay will elaborate on the facts
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above and my opinion.
To begin
 with,some
people
 are born with
communication
skills
 while others need to improve that with support and guidance over time.
People
 who are good at talking in public are well accepted and get opportunities to become leaders of society who can guide others.As far as Sri Lanka is concerned, there are various situations that public speeches become valuable including wedding ceremonies, funerals and other social gatherings for various purposes.
Communication
skills
 will polish and shine your personality and indirectly you become a dominant person.
On the other hand
,
school
 is an ideal place to improve speaking
skills
 in the early stages of life.The college environment consists of a mixture of various cultures,religions and
people
 with various social classes and the opportunities you will get to become a leader and go
to
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in front of a gathering starting at
classroom
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.It is the responsibility of both the teachers of
school
 and students to encourage them to make use of those valuable opportunities to improve their speaking
skills
 when passing out of college.Each chance and attempt will refresh your
skills
 and add new
skills
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 your life. In conclusion,
communication
skills
 in public is a fundamental fact to becoming successful and staying highlighted in society and the
school
 environment is a golden opportunity to develop those
skills
 in the early stages of life.
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