Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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some
people
that advertisements are exceedingly effective to sell
products
.
However
, others argue that it can’t draw attention as before because the public has already become familiar with it.
This
essay agrees that advertising has huge effects on customers and discusses both sides prior to
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. It is clear that promotions help purchasers to be notified and familiarized with tonnes of new
products
around the world.
Moreover
, it prompts
people
’s desire to buy these
products
on the promotion and has
positive
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impact on sales
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. It is
therefore
agreed that advertisement is a very worthwhile tool for business. Some studies suggested that during a small experiment, in which random
people
watch chocolate advertising, the amount of saliva produced by participants and their appetite significantly increased.
As a result
, individuals are likely to make
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based on their biological response.
However
, many disagree and feel that promoting is no longer effective in selling. It is true that promoting is bothering some
people
due to its repetition. Despite
this
, introducing product helps companies to gain reputation and trust from society. Because customers tend to rely on
products
of well-known companies rather than unknown ones.
For instance
, when ordinary
people
are asked in
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about
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products
manufactured by different companies. In the outcome of the survey,
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most of the partakers assumed the product from a company, with lots of
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, has higher quality. In conclusion,
this
essay acknowledges that advertising has already become cliché, but promoting could actually have visible benefits for
company
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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