You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear John, I am writing

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to express my apology for the inconvenience that happened to you

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Monday evening. As you know for the

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few months I am not at home due to some business needs. My younger son Kevin is always complaining about my absence and he shared his emotional feeling as he would not celebrate his sixth birthday without me.

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, I

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become tired due to continuous work pressure. So I would promise him that we to celebrate the birthday with our relatives and family members.

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, it was the day after the pandemic our family members gathered together and shared their love for us. I come to know how much the loud music would irritate and trouble you and your family. But I hope you can understand the situation pretty well.

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, I am apologising to you on

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occasion. After ,all I appreciate the patience you showered upon us on that particular day. I would like to visit you with my family soon for the inconvenience that happened to you because of our event. Yours sincerely, Albert

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

184 words

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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