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People's opinion differs as to whether infants should devote their leisure to their family or whether
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will not have any positive impact but one negative. I agree with the former viewpoint.
Those who argue that Spending Linking Words
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, it will affect their social interaction Skill. If Children spend Linking Words
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, Spending Linking Words
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with others help them in gaining knowledge and improving skills. Use synonyms
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However
, I sided with those who agree that infants should spend leisure with their families. One reason is that it will develop good bonding between them which will help youngsters in future. Linking Words
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, if any student is afraid of asking any doubt to their teacher they will freely ask their parents without any hesitation. Another reason is that if infants start spending Linking Words
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outside their homes they may get into Use synonyms
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bad company which will ultimately affect their whole life. Correct article usage
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