These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, many technological devices are changed and advanced continuously by
the
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scientists so they become really so modern and popular around the world. Some say that almost everyone há none
do
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not have at least one computer and mobile phone telephone and thanks to them,
people
can handle their job uncomplicatedly without going to work.
However
, from my point of view,
although
I do not deny the flexibility of
this
way, there are still more drawbacks. On the one hand, what are the advantages of working at
home
with a computer and smartphone?
First
, it deals with the issues
about
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geographical distance. It means that no matter where anyone is and, no matter how far it is among
people
in the company, they can still meet, talk and do their job together. Especially in the
COVID 19
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epidemic, it is the most effective method to connect with others.
Moreover
, when staying at
home
,
this
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can reduce the traffic jams caused mainly when
people
go to work and come
home
in the cities and
then
it will help to moderate the air pollution.
On the other hand
,
this
trend
also
has many negative aspects that outweigh the positive ones. The
first
disadvantage is that it leads to poor poorly familiar relationships with co-workers. Unlike the face to face association, online communication fails to express the actual feeling of an individual.
For example
, during the time I was a freshman, I had to study at
home
because of the COVID-19 epidemic so I did not have any close relationships except for a friend I had
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known before.
Secondly
,
home
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is distinct from the workplace. In the company, there are just jobs, assignments and
people
doing them together. On the flip side, at
home
,
besides
working,
people
have to do a lot of things
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instance: doing household chores, taking care of the children,.. and so on. They
also
are
also
attracted by many flatforms on computers and smartphones
such
as Tik Tok, Youtube, and Facebook,....which makes
people
lose their concentration on
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essential things and fall their productivity will fall. More importantly, when being in contact with those appliances for a long time,
people
may face it may result in many dangerous diseases like
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my topic
myopic
eyes,
reducing
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memories, making depression or even obesity. In conclusion, working online at
home
is just convenient in several situations, but
and
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it still has many problems. From my point of view, going to work is the best choice to promote the ability of self and develop the company.
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