Nowadays, many technological devices are changed and advanced continuously by
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scientists so they become really so modern and popular around the world. Some say that almost everyone há none
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not have at least one computer and mobile phone telephone and thanks to them,
can handle their job uncomplicatedly without going to work.
, from my point of view,
I do not deny the flexibility of
way, there are still more drawbacks.
On the one hand, what are the advantages of working at
with a computer and smartphone?
, it deals with the issues
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geographical distance. It means that no matter where anyone is and, no matter how far it is among
in the company, they can still meet, talk and do their job together. Especially in the
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epidemic, it is the most effective method to connect with others.
, when staying at
,
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can reduce the traffic jams caused mainly when
go to work and come
in the cities and
it will help to moderate the air pollution.
,
trend
has many negative aspects that outweigh the positive ones. The
disadvantage is that it leads to poor poorly familiar relationships with co-workers. Unlike the face to face association, online communication fails to express the actual feeling of an individual.
, during the time I was a freshman, I had to study at
because of the COVID-19 epidemic so I did not have any close relationships except for a friend I had
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known before.
,
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is distinct from the workplace. In the company, there are just jobs, assignments and
doing them together. On the flip side, at
,
working,
have to do a lot of things
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instance: doing household chores, taking care of the children,.. and so on. They
are
attracted by many flatforms on computers and smartphones
as Tik Tok, Youtube, and Facebook,....which makes
lose their concentration on
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essential things and fall their productivity will fall. More importantly, when being in contact with those appliances for a long time,
may face it may result in many dangerous diseases like
eyes,
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memories, making depression or even obesity.
In conclusion, working online at
is just convenient in several situations, but
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it still has many problems. From my point of view, going to work is the best choice to promote the ability of self and develop the company.