New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

The

children

of today’s generation are not familiar with

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game

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with their friends in an open playground. At present,

young

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generation

spend

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most of their free time

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using mobile, tab, and computer. It has both positive and negative sides. I unwaveringly believe that the advantages of

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latest

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devices

surpass the disadvantages of that.

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disquisition will delineate how

this

process is essential, and why we should reduce the

usages

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of

latest

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technologies.

Firstly

, it makes the

children

of

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generation cope with the latest

devices

, which is very important for their

future

. To elaborate, today’s world

is totally depends

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on advanced technology. So, they can prepare themself for the

future

by

practicing

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new instruments.

For instance

, Indian

children

are so familiar with different kinds of

device

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devices

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, which creates them very well for

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field.

Secondly

, they have

chanced

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to explore the world and can learn different types of knowledge through using mobile and

computer

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computers

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. Because

,

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there are various sources of learning equipment in advanced

devices

.

Thus

, many countries

in

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the globe encourage their

children

to

use

cutting-edge technologies in their leisure

period

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.

However

,

usage

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the usage

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of different advanced

platform

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platforms

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has some demerits.

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with, if

children

utilize modern

devices

, they have

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chanced

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to additive on these. To

extent

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, it is a common nature of

the

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human, they become

addictive

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on

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a thing, in which, they spend a lot of time.

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, a study from the University of Delhi showed that about 88% of

children

in Delhi

addicted

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with

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game

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games

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.

Thus

, many guardians in India try to avoid

use

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smartphone

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for their

children

’s

future

.

Moreover

,

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of

smartphone

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,

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and computer causes a negative impact on

children

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health.

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, present research showed that mobile is one of the main reasons

of

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cancer.

Hence

, many people are

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to

limited

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use

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of cell

phone

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phones

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. To conclude,

latest

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technologies are vital in terms of preparing for

future

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and

gain

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knowledge,

although

these are deleterious for our health, and valuable time. After

this

description, it can be

say

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said,

pros

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the pros

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of

use

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modern

devices

are higher than the drawbacks.