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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Thanks to the cutting-edge technology
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 system,
people
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 now have no difficulties interacting with foreigners in the contemporary era.
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, I believe that learning a new language can bring about additional perks in terms of personal levels. At the outset,
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 IT has never been more remarkable than now,
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 systems still have limitations. There are not only basic words to understand the language but
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 idioms play a crucial role to speak more naturally and fluently. It can be easily seen from google Translate that some idioms cannot be translated correctly, as the words and the meanings can be totally the opposite.
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,
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 are proving by having misunderstandings when they use the
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 function to communicate with others.
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 leads to the
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 reason why trilinguals can be more beneficial from several perspectives.
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 with,
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 can even get a chance to know about the culture by only learning foreign languages. What it means is that most idioms are made from the forefathers, who have had went through myriads of life experiences and difficulties.
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, there are some phrases that require digesting the cultural aspects to fully understand and use the sentences properly for the learners.
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,
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 learning process will give extra knowledge, which will eventually assist them to broaden the learner's horizons lowering the level of the public being rather suspicious or hostile about other cultures. In conclusion,
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 there are myriads of
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 apps as well as cities, which make
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 neglect the perks of learning a new language,
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 on balance, I am convinced that individuals are barking up the wrong tree as it can be a key role for
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 from various countries to be brought back together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural Appreciation
  • Cognitive Flexibility
  • Idiomatic Expressions
  • Career Advancement
  • Multilingual
  • Proficiency
  • Empathy
  • Cultural Barriers
  • Native Speaker Fluency
  • Colloquialisms
  • Language Acquisition
  • Immersive Experience
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