Nowadays many young people are going to other countries for their future. What are the reasons for it? How it will be in 30 years?

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Today, numerous juveniles are moving to different

nations

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for future opportunities.

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, I will discuss the reasons why a lot of young

people

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leave their homeland.

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, the consequences in the

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3 decades. They want to advance their career by studying and learning in different

nations

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. Another reason is to

trade

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with other

nations

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. Some students want to study to graduate from a well-respected institution

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not present in their country, like Oxford and Peking universities. The reason why many young

people

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choose to go to different countries is to

trade

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with them.

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, when trading with China, their economy is good and many products are produced in China, so it is clear why many young

people

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want to do business in China.

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, many famous universities are not in their motherland, and trading with other

nations

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can advance their business. Our nation's recession will increase in the

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3 decades. Because many young

people

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who go to other countries will use their knowledge to improve our national business and

trade

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around the world.

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, those young

people

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who went to Europe and around Asia to make friends and clients have already improved our economy today by 20

percent

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. According to the news, our country's

economies

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economy

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will keep increasing if more

people

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move to different

nations

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Hence

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, our recession will improve in the

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30 years. In conclusion, youth are going to different

nations

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to improve their education and

trade

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, and it will improve our nation's economy in the

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3 decades.

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, it is beneficial to have juveniles go to other countries.

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Nowadays many young people are going to other countries for their future. What are the reasons for it? How it will be in 30 years?

Your opinion

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