Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A number of individuals believe that both
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have obtained equilibrium in society while others opine that there is still substantial room for improvement at present. Nowadays the vast majority of traditionally male forms of employment can be conducted by
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. Young females driving delivery lorries or modern aircraft is relatively
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common even in a conservative country like Russia. Modern society and legislation do not differentiate between
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provide the same opportunities for men and ladies which is objectively the right state of affairs for contemporary society.
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has been an evolution of change from the onset of the 21st century,
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have campaigned for equality which has resulted in parity between the
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.
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are rarely objectified as ‘housewives’ or matriarchs but,
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, can compete with male counterparts for prestigious positions
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as working in politics which was unheard of in previous centuries. Despite these claims of
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being discriminated against. There are numerous examples of sexual harassment within the workplace which may be interpreted as male dominance, presenting female employees in a weaker position than males.
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can suggest that, in fact, there is still a bias as far as
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in the workforce are concerned. When scrutinized
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would seem to mostly be a construct of the media in order to increase sales to a sub-culture of progressive female empowerment, a movement which may seem to accentuate the female plight whilst trivializing the male equivalent.
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a statement as “
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’s rights are endangered”, seems rather dubious at present. Simultaneously, there are various interpretations all of which can be considered valid.
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, the fact that nowadays
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occupy almost all positions that were traditional for men shows us that the rights of the
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have already been equalized.
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