Today it is common to see a famous sportsperson advertising sports products. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a common practice in
this
present world that most
of
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famous
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athletes
athelets
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athletes
and
sports
icons becomes
brands
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ambassedors
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ambassadors
many
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sports
products and
this
helps
manufacturer
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in
the products
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the product's sales and marketing
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sales
and marketing. There are many advantages and disadvantages in
this
process and
this
essay discusses
about
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this
. On one hand, from a
manufacturer
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point of view,
sales
and marketing of
a
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sports
products can boost
up
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by selecting a renowned
sports
icon for their advertising.
For example
, It is reported that 50% of the
sales
has
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increased for the
sports wear
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manufacturer
"Nike" when they selected tennis Icon Rafel Nadal as their
brand
ambassedor
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ambassador
. The main reason behind
this
is that people have a
tentency
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tendency
to imitate exactly what their
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favourite
favorate
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favourite
sports
person does. Another advantage is that
brand
ambassedors
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help
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the manufacturer
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manufacturer
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manufacturers
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to create
brand
value.
for instance
, companies like
addidas
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Adidas
Addidas
and Reebok
also
used
sports
icons to increase their
brand
value.
On the Other hand
, if the
product
is of low
quality
,
then
it will give a bad impression to both
sports
star
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and
manufacturer
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and can result in the
sales
of the
product
.
Sports
icons
needs
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to put effort to understand the
quality
and public image of the
product
before becoming their
brand
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ambassador
.
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, one cricket icon from
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have
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featured in
the
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advertisement of
low
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quality
sports wear
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which
resulted
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his reputation. To conclude, it is fair that
sports
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a sports
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person
advertise
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for a
sports
brand
of
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he/she really
value
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the
product
quality
and
thus
increase
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his credibility.
However
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being a
brand
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ambassador
for a
brand
just for the sake of money will be
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adversely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endorsement
  • familiarity
  • influence
  • inspiration
  • trust
  • boost
  • motivation
  • over-reliance
  • quality
  • misleading
  • vetting
  • promote
  • affordable
  • celebrity status
  • effectiveness
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