The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on HealthCare System. In an effort to deal with the health issues involved, some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum so what extent do you agree or disagree.
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helps to reduce the number of overweight people. Use synonyms
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