Many think that in today’s world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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life. In recent days, there is an ongoing debate regarding

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it is necessary to keep ourselves fit and healthy and it is not a difficult task. They say that it is based on personal interest. My inclination is elaborated in

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and much more.

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the other hand, people working in

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with diet and exercise. They spend

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walking. They keep themselves healthy and hale and from severe chronic ailments. To recapitulate, I remember a

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is Wealth". My opinion is that we should be safe and healthy to avoid illness. It is necessary for each and every individual to spare some

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their work.

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Topic Vocabulary:

sedentary lifestyle
caloric intake
processed foods
dietary choices
fitness regimen
nutritional awareness
chronic diseases
preventative healthcare
lifestyle diseases
well-being
metabolic rate
food deserts
healthy eating habits
bioavailability
physical activity
body mass index (BMI)
cardiovascular health
mental resilience
exercise regimen
holistic lifestyle

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Many think that in today’s world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Many people are now working from home every day instead of travelling to the office What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this for workers and employers? Discuss your ideas and support them with reasons and examples

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