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Many think that in today’s world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#today’s #world #people #lifestyle
It is irrefutable that
health
 plays a crucial role in
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the day
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day to day
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 life. In recent days, there is an ongoing debate regarding
health
. A group of individuals believe that it is hard to balance both
health
 and
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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 in
this
buzzling
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buzzing
puzzling
 world.
However
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 others argue that
,
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 it is necessary to keep ourselves fit and healthy and it is not a difficult task. They say that it is based on personal interest. My inclination is elaborated in
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To begin
 with, majority of the people today are working in corporate companies for high compensation. They have
busy
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schedule
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schedules
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 with
hectic
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the hectic
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workload
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. They will be working on computers for a long period of
time
 leading to stress. They will not be having sufficient
time
 to
do
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exercise. They
also
 have
an
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 advantage of purchasing things
through
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online .
For instance
, amazon,
zomato
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tomato
, swiggy,
flipkart
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 and much more.
This
 makes them more sluggish.
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to
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,
on
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the other hand, people working in
software
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the software
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department
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,celebrities and models will be
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conscious
concious
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conscious
on
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 their
health
. They will have diet habits as well as
they
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go to
gym
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the gym
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 despite
the
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 busy schedule. They will
also
 have a gym trainer who teaches them about daily
routine
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routines
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 with diet and exercise. They spend
time
atleast
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at least
 an hour daily
for
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walking. They keep themselves healthy and hale and from severe chronic ailments. To recapitulate, I remember a
phase
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phrase
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 "
Health
 is Wealth". My opinion is that we should be safe and healthy to avoid illness. It is necessary for each and every individual to spare some
time
 for their body despite
of
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their work.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • caloric intake
  • processed foods
  • dietary choices
  • fitness regimen
  • nutritional awareness
  • chronic diseases
  • preventative healthcare
  • lifestyle diseases
  • well-being
  • metabolic rate
  • food deserts
  • healthy eating habits
  • bioavailability
  • physical activity
  • body mass index (BMI)
  • cardiovascular health
  • mental resilience
  • exercise regimen
  • holistic lifestyle
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