Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.

Education
is the foremost concept in the world, where all most all
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the
children
in every nation are participating in
this
methodology for
their
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development of the brain,
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their physical attributes etc.
Homework
is one part of the
education
theory, today half of
humankind
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believe
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that
children
attending
school
should not be given work to do after
school
by their educators and while the opponents argue that
homework
plays a major role in the life of
children
. The following essay will contradict both of the aforementioned views and my point of view about the options. To commence with, in the past the older generation had a limited amount of time for their
school
activities which is from 9 am to 1.30 pm. But with the development of the technology and introduction of new curriculums to the
education
industry
children
have to study
longer
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hours in schools, due to these factors, educators providing extra
homework
other than teaching in
school
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children
depressed and
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to various diseases
such
as mental disorders.
Moreover
, youngsters are addicted to
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technological devices, and giving
homework
to them will never be helpful since they never
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their own brains, most of them get answers and different ideas from the internet.
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I believe,
school
work given after
school
by teachers is
an
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prominent factor for the
children
to revisit the lessons learned in
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school
and
also
which
this
helps the
children
to develop their minds for
the
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future exams. As an example
children
face science and maths as the hardest subjects in the curriculum, educators providing
homework
for these subjects train the mind of pupils, as well as their cognitive development, develops. Despite these facts,
children
have a limited time in
school
years where they have more time for
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gadgets gadgets
in the future, making these kids busy in their
school
life will lead them to have a great future as well as develop their
education
skills, allow them to master subjects. To sum up, in my opinion providing
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children
with
homework
is an intelligent factor by teachers and
children
should know how to balance their
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life style
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without getting depressed.
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  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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