You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Jay, I hope you're doing well. I'm writing to apologise for damaging your

book

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while you were away.

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with, I am so very sorry for damaging your management

book

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. What happened is, I was going through some of the chapters of the

book

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and accidentally I knocked my cup of coffee and it splashed all over the

book

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. Most of the pages that were opened at that time had coffee stains on them.

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, the incident took place the very

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day of your departure on Tuesday in the morning around 10 AM. I remember

this

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, only

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because

becuase

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because

there was a major accident on the street and one passenger lost his life.

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, I thought repair is not possible but after some

research

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I found one repairer who can fix the

book

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as good as new. But, the cost of the repair is too high and I

willing

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to contribute towards it. Once again, I apologise for damaging your

book

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and I hope you can forgive me. Warm wishes, Aneel

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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