The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The 2 tables compare temperatures and duration of
daytime
from Friday 28th to Sunday 30th between Add an article
the daytime
London
and Use synonyms
Sydney
in December of the year 2018.
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Overall
, Linking Words
Sydney
, Australia featured Use synonyms
a
far Remove the article
apply
more
warmer weather and enjoyed Change the word
apply
longer
duration of daytime than Correct article usage
a longer
London
from Friday 28th to Sunday 30th Use synonyms
in
December 2018. There was little fluctuation observed for temperature in Change preposition
of
London
Use synonyms
while
the figure had remained gradual and slightly increase by the end of the week. Though, both observed Linking Words
a stable hours
of daylight over the period.
On Friday 28th, Correct the article-noun agreement
stable hours
a stable hour
temperature
in Add an article
the temperature
Sydney
, Australia ranged between 26 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
celcius
Correct your spelling
celsius
Use synonyms
degree
in Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
maxium
and 17 Correct your spelling
maximum
Use synonyms
celcius
Correct your spelling
celsius
Use synonyms
degree
in Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
minium
compared to the one in Correct your spelling
minimum
London
, UK Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
with
Correct article usage
a maxium
maxium
of 9 Correct your spelling
maximum
Use synonyms
celcius
Correct your spelling
celsius
degree
and Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a minium
minium
of 4 Correct your spelling
minimum
Use synonyms
celcius
degrees. Correct your spelling
celsius
However
, it was Linking Words
Correct article usage
a littly
littly
warmer in both Correct your spelling
little
London
and Use synonyms
Sydney
with below 13 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
celcius
Correct your spelling
celsius
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degree
and more than 18 Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
Use synonyms
celcius
Correct your spelling
celsius
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degree
respective on Saturday 29th. Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
At the end
of the weekend, the temperature of Linking Words
Sydney
reached its peak at 31 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
celcius
Correct your spelling
celsius
degree
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while
it is quite cooler at 10 Linking Words
Celcius
Use synonyms
degree
in Use synonyms
London
.
Both Use synonyms
Sydney
and Use synonyms
London
Use synonyms
has
remained approximately 8 hours and slightly more than 14 hours Correct subject-verb agreement
have
repsectively
of daytime duration throughout the weekends.Correct your spelling
respectively
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sydney, celcius, degree with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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