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Some people believe that, proffessional such as, doctors and engineers, should be requie red to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish

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It is sometimes argued that
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people
 who are working as professionals doctors or engineers should be required to
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country
. Whilst, others claim that
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 they should be free to
work
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. If they want. I completely agree with
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, professional
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 not only benefit
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people
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 health. On the one hand, doctors and teachers are very vital to our modern society. Current days, most
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people
 have their own job. Humans should
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right
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 the University. After that, they entered the study, they
work
 where they want. Give an example, doctors
work
 for less than ten hours while
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 other time is insufficient to take care of themselves. In
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, the earth is huge and a large number of
people
 want as much as the teacher takes and they do not know what God has written for them. If we take what we want that might will be disaster
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this
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, the majority of
people
 study
their
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country
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, others
wish
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 learn or
work
 in another state. Because, nowadays, times are changing a lot.
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 want to study in other modern nations. On top of that, in
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country's
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people
 pay a lot.
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, humans
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 quarrels. I would like to restate my
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. All of them wish in foreign nations as well as they can do
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