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Human activities have negative effects on plant and animals species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The negative effects of human activities on plant and animal species are the most important problem that many countries face.
However
, some
people
 think it is too late to do anything to change the situation, but others believe that we can improve it through effective measures. In my opinion, I deeply agree with
this
 that
people
 should realize the seriousness of
this
 problem and do their best to resolve it. Some
people
 think that protecting the
environment
 or
animals
 is too late. The economy is developing all over the world. That means lots of countries are focused on the rate of economical increasing ignore the
environment
 has been destroyed. So they think it is not useful to do anything. In some cities in China,
for example
, the solid has been becoming sand because
people
 destroyed forests to expand cities. As well as the population in these cities is raising at a high speed but the
plants
 and
animals
 are decreasing very fast.
On the other hand
, some
people
 believe that we can do our best to control and change the
environment
 we are living. The reason is with technology developed, we can find more methods to protect
plants
 and
animals
.
In addition
, all
people
 have the same realization to avoid the
environment
 being destroyed.
Moreover
, biodiversity is an extremely important subject that most scientists are researching. Maintaining the health balance of the chin of food is our duty. So we should try many ways to protect
plants
 and
animals
 because we can live alone without
plants
 and
animals
.
For instance
, some developed nations announced laws to protect the
environment
 and encourage
people
 to learn how to avoid destroying it.
This
 is the wiser way to deliver a positive mind to
people
. In conclusion, protecting the
environment
 is one of the most important things that all
people
 should do.
Although
 it is not easy to achieve, we should do it step by step.
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