The prison system has not been effective at reforming criminals. A large number of convicted felons return to committing crimes soon after being released. What are the problems with the prison system and what solution can you recommend to address this issue?

Criminals are re-joining their previous criminal activity after passing throw prison.It is show that the current prison rule is not going well.In my opinion,all human beings are equally right of living a normal
life
.Some bad situations make people commit crimes.In
this
essay,I will discuss the problems of the prisoning system and try to explain the right way of solutions.
To begin
with,the
reason
for the problems behind the prison rule on going these days.
Firstly
,well behave with the mob in lockup.Generally in lockup jailor is very cruel to criminals, and that's the main
reason
the mob felt angrier with policemen and the system because of behaving like animals.
However
,
although
they did crimes still they are human to the extent make the environment live like a family.
Secondly
,lack of proper education,
moreover
,in
jail
we can give well education about how we live a good
life
after finishing penitentiary
life
and some special training they can use after passing through
jail
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On the other hand
,It is the reality that both the problem and result are the two sides of the same coin which run in parallel.The main result of
this
problem is to give well education and training some skills.In ,
jail
we can give awareness camping and some useful skill training like maintenance training ,language class,cooking training etc.Another solution is to talk with them and knows the
reason
behind the committed crime.If we give a familiar environment to the criminal they will tell the original
reason
behind the crime.
Furthermore
,we can solve their problems and give them a strong logic to live a normal
life
after being out of
jail
. In conclusion,when we found the main logic behind the crime
then
only we might make a solution.Criminals
also
the same as us all are normal human beings.
Therefore
we all try to do normal behave with them after they come out from
jail
.
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