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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have a healths problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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It took George
Monbiot
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 a long time to fully commit to cutting animal products out of his diet. Despite working on a pig farm in his youth and witnessing animals treated “appallingly, like they’re already just a lump of meat” it was Prime Minister Liz Truss who
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 tipped the scale. After discovering that a dairy farm in Devon was dumping vast amounts of toxic waste into a local river,
Monbiot
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 reported the incident to the Environment Agency. He was met with silence. At the time, Truss was head of the Department of Environment,
Food
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 and Rural Affairs, and whistleblowers later revealed they had been instructed from the top to turn a blind eye to dairy farms. “My response to that was if the government isn’t prepared to regulate
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 industry
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 I’m not prepared to eat its products,”
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 says.
Food
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, and where it comes from, is something
Monbiot
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 has been thinking about ever since his stint on the pig farm. And it’s the subject of his latest book, Regenesis: Feeding the world without devouring the planet. Since the book was published earlier
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 year,
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 has become a dominant theme. An unprecedented drought destroyed crops across the UK
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 summer, the war in Ukraine has disrupted supply chains, and rampant inflation has left
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 unaffordable for millions.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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