Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have a healths problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

It took George
Monbiot
a long time to fully commit to cutting animal products out of his diet. Despite working on a pig farm in his youth and witnessing animals treated “appallingly, like they’re already just a lump of meat” it was Prime Minister Liz Truss who
finally
tipped the scale. After discovering that a dairy farm in Devon was dumping vast amounts of toxic waste into a local river,
Monbiot
reported the incident to the Environment Agency. He was met with silence. At the time, Truss was head of the Department of Environment,
Food
and Rural Affairs, and whistleblowers later revealed they had been instructed from the top to turn a blind eye to dairy farms. “My response to that was if the government isn’t prepared to regulate
this
industry
then
I’m not prepared to eat its products,”
Monbiot
says.
Food
, and where it comes from, is something
Monbiot
has been thinking about ever since his stint on the pig farm. And it’s the subject of his latest book, Regenesis: Feeding the world without devouring the planet. Since the book was published earlier
this
year,
food
has become a dominant theme. An unprecedented drought destroyed crops across the UK
this
summer, the war in Ukraine has disrupted supply chains, and rampant inflation has left
food
unaffordable for millions.
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