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In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their kids when women work full time. What are the reasons? It is a positive or negative development?

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Some folks believe that in various countries, the majority of males are given priority to staying at home to take care of their
children
 while females perform full-time duties. There are many reasons for it
such
 as they want to develop good bonding with their minors , and give more opportunities to women.
Firstly
, in many
cases
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 it is seen that kids' and fathers' bonding are less than mothers. If men prefer to stay at the house and spend some time with their
children
, it is a better chance to make strong bonding with them. So, it can be the
first
 reason, and
hence
 both
parents
 can give equal love and care to their juveniles.
Second
 of all, at present,
parents
 understand that they need to contribute equally to their financial needs. So, women
also
 are starting to work for normal business hours so that they could get good wages in order to fulfil their necessities.
Additionally
, some men do not prefer to go outside and they find some work so that they could do work as well look after their
children
.
This
 is a positive development because in
this
 way women are becoming independent and
children
 are able to grab their
parents
' love and care equally.
Moreover
, both
parents
 contribute to their child's growth, lifestyle, and education as well.
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