Around the worldit is likely that more adualts will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or negative development.

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world it

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world

is likely that more adults will

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online from

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, and more children will

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from

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. The technology become inexpensive and more suitable.

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and cons of

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development.

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, there are many pros of computer technology, especially in

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and

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. individuals want to

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at

home

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to the workplace. It is

more

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a more

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comfortable place than the workplace. Pupils are concentrated in

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school If they

study

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at

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that will increase concentration. Research conducted by CNN revealed that most private

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and

public

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school

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turned

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online

education

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. Because

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is very flexible and children easily focus on

study

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. In the online class

students

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focuslesson

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focus lesson

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of

distract

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other

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objects. Professor says

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thing for adults because when they were working from

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they can not talk with

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colleagues

collegues

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they will easily concentrate. Research conducted by Koc University revealed that Online

education

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more

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essential than

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to

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education

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. Koc University compared both

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way

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. Online

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is eligible

about

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price accessibility and opportunities.

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example

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in online

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we can attend a lesson in every location but we can not do the same thing in

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the

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education

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.

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is more properly den online

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. I know it is a personal preference

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depends on people but I will explain my ideas.

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online working is less influential than

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working. Research conducted

that

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by CNBC revealed that Most

students

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struggle in internship cause of online

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and lack of

work

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experience.

face

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to

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always better in

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and

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life because in

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education

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students

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can imagine in their

mind

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but they can not do the same thing in online

education

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. It is

same

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the same

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in working online working is

a

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issue for individuals because it leads to misunderstanding

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it would be difficult. Negative

effects

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are dominating positive

effects

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therefore

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I

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apply

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online

education

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and

work

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life

is

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harmful. Some

syllabus

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do not properly for online

education

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we can not teach biology with online

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. İf pupils do not understand the lesson they can not prepare an assignment. İt causes a lot of issues.

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example

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unsuccessful

students

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can not take a scholarship. In conclusion, There are many pros and cons

about

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online

education

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and

work

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life but

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think the negative

effects

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are more than

positive

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the positive

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effects

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.