some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same openion as them. Other people believe its good to have friends who some time disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own openion.

Good
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relationship
with
people
is the
first
solid foundation in building friendship. Some
people
believe that it
best
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to choose
friends
with
similar
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way
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of reasoning while others are opined to selecting
friends
who
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some time
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have
distinct
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opinion
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with
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them .
However
,
this
essay will discuss both
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and
also
elucidate why I absolutely think that humans who possess good
relationship
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relationships
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should have sometimes different views in life.
Firstly
,
difference
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in idealogy is the bedrock character in every
relationship
which fosters growth as well as
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long lasting
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relationships .
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various
occassion
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occasions
friends
should disagree with certain ideas and state why reasons for their opinion
this
is because for a friendship to be geniue
they
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people
involved need not
to
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be scared to say no to a
constracting
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constructing
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contrasting
view , they should be a constructive
dabate
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debate
on certain issues .
This
fosters learning in associations and triggers a positive drive to attain the best knowledge in different
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of life.
For instance
, among high school close association recent studies
shows
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that student who
remain
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friend throughout school do not have
same
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ideology but different ideas which
helps
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them to stay together and assist one another in their academic growth. In
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contract
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, some
people
claim that
friends
should always give
same
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the same
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option.
People
have
such
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because they think
friends
should always be the birds of
same
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feather at all times without any differing opinions . A true story example could be related to a story of two black American
friends
who never had any contract ground on anything
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the
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were
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seen to be as close as brothers but
this
relationship
as expected did not
last
up to a year because one of them was pretending to be nice in order to benefit money from his friend .
This
is
however
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, not a sure way to boost a genuine friendship. Conclusively,
people
that think
friends
should have
same
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opinions in life have
a
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shallow
thought
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thoughts
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about truth and honesty in
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a relationship
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relationship
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. I strongly believe that close association among
people
should
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a given level of disagreement.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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