There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year.While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, ,many believe that other meausres will be needed. Discuss both sides.
The chronic crime rates continue to increase yearly. While many believe the
death
sentence is the most effective judgment to deter criminals
, others think that other punishments like long-term
term
imprisonment
would rather be needed. In my opinion, I believe the combination of the death
sentence and long-term
term
imprisonment
will reduce serious crimes
.
Owing to the increase in serious crimes
in society
, some people proposed capital punishment as a deterrent. In order words, they believe sentencing criminals
to death
will save society
from potential crimes
, and many upcoming criminals
will desist from crime. Also
, there will no opportunity to recommit crimes
. For example
, the Indonesian government awards the death
penalty to drug peddlers due to the serious negative impacts this
type of crime can have on society
.
However
, some people believe other approaches like long sentences should rather be awarded to serious crimes
. With this
, they believe that criminals
will have an opportunity to repent and contribute positively to society
after their prison term
. For example
, a criminal that killed many worshippers in a mosque in New Zealand was sentenced to long imprisonment
.
In my opinion, the court's judgment, whether capital punishment or long-term
term
imprisonment
should be awarded based on the level of crimes
. For example
, a killer should be sentenced to death
while,
a thief should be given Remove the comma
apply
imprisonment
. This
Remove the redundancy
apply
this
, this
will remove hysteria from society
because,
citizens will understand when they are killed and imprisoned
In conclusion, court judgment on Remove the comma
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criminals
should be given based on the level of crimes
committed. Therefore
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