Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to favour uncontrolled nutrition has come embattled over the past decade, following scientists’ booming concern

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health.

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has centred on whether it

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with banning markets from distributing these products. I am utterly convinced that

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prohibition

is of significance.

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that

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action is highly likely to raise

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, and

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contend that the result would relieve

children

from

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mental issues. Presumably, most of the detrimental food is processed with unconventional ingredients triggering

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early death while

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is considered

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the permanent priority of any sustainable development,

that is

to say, having perished unhealthy products, people in compliance with official law would choose between healthy ones. Either obesity or diabetes, currently, would be

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controlled

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if energy drinks,

for instance

,

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had been hampered advertising.

Besides

, hardly could any scientist anticipate its ramifications on genetic mutation depriving people

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the right to have long-lasting life.

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reasons vividly elaborate how adjusting surveillance on selling

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harmful

harmfull

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harmful

goods aligned with

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. Another problem

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in

children

's mental symptoms.

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, the more they consume untested materials, the more they impose severe anxiety,

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deficit

hyperactive disorder ,and relentless stress during their growth period.

Although

a bewildering array of food companies take

children

's health for granted, the consequences of selling these goods

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expected to have deteriorated public health by decade, by the same token, authorities should consider not allowing them to do that by regarding

children

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of countries.

By contrast

, lucrative turnover in these companies might experience economic

depriviation

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deprivation

due in part to deflecting in their supply and demand chain;

however

, banning

this

trend is of lots of merits that explicitly overshadow its flaws. Based on the arguments

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above, I want to

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reaffirm

my position that selling unhealthy food and drink should be forbidden. Not only could

this

action clear the path for

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and fruitful life, but

also

would hinder

children

to be raised

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and unstabilized mentally.