Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problem Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Most people believe that the main environmental problem currently is because of the distinct of particular
species
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of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental
issues
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.
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other atmospheric
issues
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have shown serious
issues
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to the
earth
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, I believe that the primary environmental issue is caused by the
loss
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of
species
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as it has disturbed the life cycles and created medical problems in humans. On the one hand, there are various problems which led to the depletion of the
earth
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. To be more clear, other problems
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as noise pollution, and disruption of the ozone layer have created
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to a larger extent in the surrounding it had led to increased temperature of the
earth
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, natural disasters, etc leading to disruption of the
earth
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.
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, glacier melting has caused 35% of flooding in different parts of the globe.
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, I believe that
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secondary outcomes are the results of primary actions done by humans.
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, the extinction of
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has disrupted the life cycles of many organisms.
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to say that, the
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of particular
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and plants has deprived humans of to access free oxygen and food sources for living, possibly leading to medical
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such
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as asthma, lung cancer, etc.
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, the availability of the plant named 'Funissa' has been shown to eradicate different breathing
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, by replacing carbon dioxide with oxygen at a faster pace.
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, I believe that specific
loss
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of flora and fauna impacts human health greatly which is the most important point of concern. In conclusion, even though, there are more environmental
issues
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which need to be solved other than
loss
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of organisms, I believe that human health is the foremost essential problem, and
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it should be prioritized
first
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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