It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
are lucky because of the
skills
they have.
Although
generally assume that only
people
who are born with the ability for music or sport become successful, others assert that talents are just a tool for accomplishment. I will discuss both sides and show why I agree with the latter.
First
of all, most
people
want to have talents which are inherent,
however
, the abilities are not chosen by the public.
This
does not mean that if you do not have any talent, you cannot achieve your target. Compared to
people
without capability and capability, we can say that, in order to achieve success, a community without
skills
should try harder.
For instance
, philosopher Demosthenes who is from Athena was not good at talking. He did not talk fluently and accurately.
However
, he did not give up. He put a rock in his mouth and exercised every day.
Then
, he became a good public speaker.
Secondly
,
people
who have no
skills
believe that because they have no expertise in music, they cannot be a musician.
This
assertion is not completely correct
however
, it may be correct for some perceptions.
For example
, communities that were born tall, are generally prone to basketball.
In addition
, they probably will be successful. To sum up, whether
skills
are necessary for accomplishment or not is a controversial issue all over the world.
However
, the argument that abilities are just a tool for achievement is more dominant. And I am more likely to support the
second
argument.
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