It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
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are lucky because of the
skills
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they have.
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generally assume that only
people
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who are born with the ability for music or sport become successful, others assert that talents are just a tool for accomplishment. I will discuss both sides and show why I agree with the latter.
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of all, most
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want to have talents which are inherent,
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, the abilities are not chosen by the public.
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does not mean that if you do not have any talent, you cannot achieve your target. Compared to
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without capability and capability, we can say that, in order to achieve success, a community without
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should try harder.
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, philosopher Demosthenes who is from Athena was not good at talking. He did not talk fluently and accurately.
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, he did not give up. He put a rock in his mouth and exercised every day.
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, he became a good public speaker.
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,
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who have no
skills
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believe that because they have no expertise in music, they cannot be a musician.
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assertion is not completely correct
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, it may be correct for some perceptions.
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, communities that were born tall, are generally prone to basketball.
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, they probably will be successful. To sum up, whether
skills
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are necessary for accomplishment or not is a controversial issue all over the world.
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, the argument that abilities are just a tool for achievement is more dominant. And I am more likely to support the
second
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argument.
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