Governments in many countries are replacing old buildings such as art galleries and town halls with new ones. Is this a positive or a negative development?

In many countries, old

buildings

such

as art galleries and town halls are converted into new structures by the governments. In my view, I consider

this

would be a negative approach as the local history could be wiped out and some businesses may be affected negatively. On the one hand, historical places are samples of the art and ancient custom of the previous people living in an area. These

buildings

are

also

cultural legacies which are inherited from the ancestors. The local artists exhibit the thoughts, ideas and beliefs of the natives through their artworks.

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architecture used in the construction of these

buildings

displays the way of living and

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.

This

also

shaped the culture

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and the traditions of the previous people.

As a result

,

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of these historical

buildings

could remove the background of that nation and

therefore

, younger generations would not be able to identify their identities clearly. For

this

reason, historical

buildings

around the world are preserved by the UN organization. They receive funds to be kept secure and immune.

On the other hand

, old

buildings

could play a significant role in

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economy

.

In other words

, tourists from other countries travel to

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places which are culturally rich. They spend money on accommodation, food, transport and purchasing souvenirs.

thus

, the local businesses will be flourished.

This

could benefit the local

economy

. in order to cushion the negative impacts of converting these

buildings

into

newer

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, they can be repaired to revive them.

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of money that could be

otherwise

expended in other essential sectors

such

as health and education and the

economy

of that place will not be damaged. To sum up, I think that

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restoring

old structures will benefit the local communities as it will greatly save

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financial resources and the

economy

could be positively affected.

This

could

also

preserve the cultural

heritages

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and help the people know their backgrounds.