It is cruel to keep animals in zoos. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I don't like the idea of keeping
animals
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in cages and exposing them, because
animals
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lose their
freedom
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.
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to the fact that the places where they keep the
animals
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are not safe for both the
animals
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and the people who visit the zoo, some
animals
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get sick so
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they infect other
animals
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and even die. It's amazing how people come to like to see
animals
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in cages knowing very well that they suffer from lack of
freedom
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. In conclusion and my personal opinion is that there are no famous zoos and let
animals
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live in peace without losing the
freedom
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to get their own food, reproduce, create a family and make their own decision
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where to live or what to do with their lives and that each animal is independent in every aspect and not because a human has the idea of locking them in cages and exposing them to have than to die like
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. It is cruel and very sad to see
animals
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suffer even if some people think
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, I hope humanity changes its mind about it and leaves
animals
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in
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their maximum
freedom
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.
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