Does the educational success of a student depend on the teacher or the attitude. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Nowadays one of the widely discussed issues is some people believe that a proficient tutor is necessary for grad students to get

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category. It is undeniable that knowledge given by teachers has become an integral part of our life.

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there is no absolute agreement as some people find it is beneficial while others consider everything associated with it is

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I will examine both pros and cons of

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controversial issue. There are some valid arguments why some people believe certain factors

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the level of education. If the

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have the desire to learn, even qualified teachers with any mature potential will not be able to make him interested in the lesson, I think it depends on the

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himself.

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,I have a classmate who plays sports. but he believes that school lessons are not useful to become a famous athlete.

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does not attend classes. even when he enters the class, he doesn't care what the

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says. In my

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it is up to the

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be interested.

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a good

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is definitely needed for students to learn. if their teaching skills are excellent, they will make any

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want to study even more. but the

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must

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have a high desire to learn.

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, 2 years ago I was not interested in English at all. But one day a new

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come to our school. I went to his class and I liked the way she taught and I got interested in English.

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made me passionate about the lesson. In conclusion, having weighed everything mentioned up I can come to

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conclusion that in my

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A grad

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's success in education depends

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of all on his enthusiasm. No great

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can help him if he doesn't want to

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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