Some people think that use of social networking apps is very beneficial in today's world. some say that it put negative impacts on the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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some think that it
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bad effects on the community.
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of
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using different
apps
in our lives.
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to communicate with your friends and family by using applications. Many
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the
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overseas
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pakistani
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Pakistanis
are consuming different social networking
apps
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contact
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their
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ones.
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in
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so whenever want to contact her so
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can easily free call her on
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what apps
by using
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people
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type of
apps
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make
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their lives
easily
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.
such
as
people
take advantage of using these
apps
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while finding
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during the namaz. majority of
people
believe that it
to
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just open your
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and find
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easily wherever you are in the world.
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area so I utilize
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on the other hand
,
people
think that these
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apps
creating
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negative
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impact on the public.
such
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apps
which provide bad content to under ages
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children
childrens
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.
apps
which give
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to our youth. To illustrate,
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TikTok
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app
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negitive
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which really
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impact on daily life because
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doing
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thing
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on
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TikTok
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frame
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.
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,
people
think that
apps
create
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negitive
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to
the
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society.
such
as
few
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apps
which are doing scam
with
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people's
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. many
apps
asked
people
to transfer their money into it and give scam
people
in many ways in their money.
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the app
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app
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used to work for crypto trading so sometime they scam
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people
and liquidity with money in future trading. to sum up,
people
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to
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many benefits of having social media networking but other think that it
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negative
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negitive
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impact on
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public
pulic
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. In my opinion, there are more benefits than
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disadvantage
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of
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using network
apps
such
as
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to
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their
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love
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one
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easily and
also
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while finding
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for namaz.
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