Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen

Dear Mr Smith, My name is Gurmit Singh. I have been living

to your home with my family for five years. I am writing

this

letter to express my disappointment because of your new dog. I have noticed that the pet which you bought recently for your children always makes noise,

as a result

, we are unable to focus on our task I am a professional engineer and due to the corona pandemic I ought to attend official meetings from my home but due to your pet, it is challenging for me to complete my everyday work within the time period. As you are living in a reputed society it is your responsibility to manage all the protocols of the area,

hence

, I would suggest you that please keep your pet inside of your home so that local people can complete their work smoothly.

Otherwise

, necessary action will be taken by the community. I am looking forward to your prompt action. Yours sincerely Submit

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7 paragraphs

165 words

8.50

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Clear and correct grammar

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