social media is promoting communication between people . do you agree or disagree ?
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society
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the disadvantages
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issue.
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of this
media
apps take the place of Use synonyms
communication
interaction in today's society. One of the major merits is that social Use synonyms
media
allow Use synonyms
people
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talk
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to talk
any
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at any
it
means that Correct pronoun usage
which
people
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closer
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a closer
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to their
their
partner to talk. Take Facebook as an Correct pronoun usage
apply
examples
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in group
depend
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depending
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people
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community
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the community
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communication
is better. Change preposition
of communication
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is mainly because Linking Words
people
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message
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messages
consequently
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communication
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On the other hand
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shortcomings
media
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communication
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communicate
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and
demerit is that Correct word choice
apply
people
do not Use synonyms
direct
interaction. In other Add a missing verb
have direct
word
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words
people
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lead
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leads
decrease
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couple
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couples
facebook
messenger. Change the capitalization
Facebook
Thus
, they do not go outside their home to interact. Linking Words
As a result
, the population is becoming isolated and lonely.
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face
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face
less than ever today, my opinion advantage Use synonyms
outweigh
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the disadvantage
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disadvantages
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