social media is promoting communication between people . do you agree or disagree ?
In recent years, there is a growing recognition of
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the popularity
media
which is replacing face
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communication
among people
many
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societies
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the disadvantages
this
issue.
On the one hand, it is obvious that there are many benefits significant when social Change preposition
of this
media
apps take the place of communication
interaction in today's society. One of the major merits is that social media
allow people
talk
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to talk
any
time Change preposition
at any
it
means that Correct pronoun usage
which
people
do not need closer
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a closer
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to their
their
partner to talk. Take Facebook as an Correct pronoun usage
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examples
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in group
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depending
As a result
, people
can keep in touch with community
very easy. Another positive is need to mention is that the quality Add an article
the community
communication
is better. Change preposition
of communication
This
is mainly because people
can talk with their partner through video calls, voice or simple message
depending situation, Fix the agreement mistake
messages
consequently
the geographical gap is narrowed because of social communication
.
On the other hand
, there are some shortcoming
when using social Fix the agreement mistake
shortcomings
media
to communication
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communicate
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first
obvious and
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apply
people
do not direct
interaction. In other Add a missing verb
have direct
word
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words
people
have few outdoor activities. The result of this
is that more and more people
do not like
hang out, which Add the particle
tolike
lead
to Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
decrease
health of Correct article usage
a decrease
people
. Another negative aspect is that modern couple
meet through Tinder and break up on Fix the agreement mistake
couples
facebook
messenger. Change the capitalization
Facebook
Thus
, they do not go outside their home to interact. As a result
, the population is becoming isolated and lonely.
In conclusion, people
speak face
to face
less than ever today, my opinion advantage outweigh
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outweighs
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the disadvantage
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disadvantages
people
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between the time they spend talking online and talking Add an article
a balance
the balance
face
to face
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