Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
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Advancement of technology helped the medical field in all senses ,particularly in
immunisation
and vaccination area. Compared to earlier days, many childhood diseases have been wiped out completely with the help of vaccines. It is Correct article usage
the immunisation
parents
' duty to make sure that their kids
are getting vaccinated against common diseases and this
essay discusses the enforcement of the law if the parents
fail to immunise
their kids
.
Firstly
, it is a big mistake if a parent decides not to immunise
their kids
. They don't have the right to take decisions and they have to regret it badly if anything goes wrong. for example
, some parents
in the early 90s were reluctant to give polio vaccines to kids
due to their religious beliefs which resulted badly in the child's health. The best way is to follow the instructions of health authorities.
Secondly
, if any parents
decide not to immunise
their kids
, then
the law should be enforced. No matter what. Correct your spelling
In fact
Infact
these law is already in place in many developed countries like the US, UK and Germany. Correct your spelling
In fact
However
many other countries such
as India, and Bangladesh, where parents
are not educated about the importance of vaccination and hence
they are still reluctant. This
can be overcome by giving social and basic health awareness classes and governments should take initiative for this
.
To conclude, all parents
have to be aware of the importance of immunisation and it is the government's responsibility to do basic awareness classes. if any parent still does not immunise
their kids
, then
this
should be treated as a legal offence.Submitted by bilujohn on
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