Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Advancement of technology helped the medical field in all senses ,particularly in

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and vaccination area. Compared to earlier days, many childhood diseases have been wiped out completely with the help of vaccines. It is

parents

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' duty to make sure that their

kids

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are getting vaccinated against common diseases and

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essay discusses the enforcement of the law if the

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fail to

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their

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, it is a big mistake if a parent decides not to

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their

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. They don't have the right to take decisions and they have to regret it badly if anything goes wrong.

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, some

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in the early 90s were reluctant to give polio vaccines to

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due to their religious beliefs which resulted badly in the child's health. The best way is to follow the instructions of health authorities.

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, if any

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decide not to

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their

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the law should be enforced. No matter what.

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these law is already in place in many developed countries like the US, UK and Germany.

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many other countries

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as India, and Bangladesh, where

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are not educated about the importance of vaccination and

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they are still reluctant.

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can be overcome by giving social and basic health awareness classes and governments should take initiative for

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. To conclude, all

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have to be aware of the importance of immunisation and it is the government's responsibility to do basic awareness classes. if any parent still does not

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their

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should be treated as a legal offence.