Some people think that old people need to live in special communities, but others believe they should live with their family and adult children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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parent should live,

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should live is critical because

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is a sensitive issue in terms of which location is good for them and how they should live furtherly.

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some believe that

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should be living in the designated community for them , other argue that

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the ideal place to live for them.

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below.

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, our old generation requires

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special social place to accommodate them because the oldest people need to be in a common environment where they share the same value and communicate at the same level with each other.

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, modern developed children mostly don't understand their

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' old way of thinking and outdated habits which were inherited many years ago.

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will definitely lead to conflicts and misunderstandings inside

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the family while

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creating not comfortable conditions.

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, our old ancestors have values which are totally controversial from ours since we are existing and developing with high-rate technologies and innovations which are not completely familiar to our mothers and fathers.So, living in a special community where others like them live with the same values, logic and behaviour will create for old people

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comfort zone to live.

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, our

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need our fondness and care and demand warm attitudes towards them.

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will provide a motivation to live and inspire them to have longer life because living with their kids and grandchildren will raise their positive mood without stress.

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, older who are busy with the care of their

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by involving in entertainment and events with whom they loved and are extremely close will feel happier and joyful. So, living with

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is crucial in terms of happiness and joyful mood which extend their lives.

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, whereas some claim that certain communities will be beneficial for the old ,generation others see the drawbacks of it by stating that

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are the best places to live for our

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special environment is excellent for the old because the same values and ideas could be supported by all old communities,

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living with their children will definitely provide happy and longer life with entertainment and joy. If people have an option for selection , they should decide by themselves which side is convenient for them in future.