Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the acdemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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many that
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particularly
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particularly
in the field of research ,business and academics,while
other
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others
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believe that
this
info is so
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precious
that
this
behaviour should be prohibited .
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also
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why sharing any
peace
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of
information
can benefit an entire nation,
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concerns about
puplishing
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publishing
information
in academics sectors
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quite understandable .And the reason for
that is
that some of
these
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information
,
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if fell
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the wrong hand, can be used incorrectly to serve personal needs or even worse to destroy nations.
For example
,sharing
knowledge
about how nuclear bombs if formed can leads to some
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in
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making them ,and wide-world
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destruction
distruction
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destruction
.
Thus
,in some circumstances ,some
information
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better
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be
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kept hidden. on the other
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,providing
public
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the public
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with
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scientific
scintefic
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scientific
information
,
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can bring about many benefits.
Nation
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can make use of research to
devolop
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develop
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itself
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it self
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itself
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.
Moreover
,personnel can benefit from
these
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puplished
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published
knowledge
to advance in their career or to invent things which in
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tern
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leads to
development
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of
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.to illustrate ,it has been found that most of the current machines that we use
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based on shared
information
that has been developed by the
inventer
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inventor
.
In other words
,he upgraded the
information
and used it to make
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something
somthing
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something
that is
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useful
usefull
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useful
.
as a result
, sharing
knowledge
can have
a
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merit of benefit. In conclusion,it has been
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quite
of
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a debate on
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whether
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whether
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scientific
scinetfic
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scientific
info should be shared or not.
This
essay discussed both views and illustrated why I
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find
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found
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useful to share
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scientific
scintfic
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scientific
knowledge
widely.
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