You want to sell your Laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you are selling the Laptop • Describe the Laptop. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

Dear Bob, I hope you are well, I remembered that you said you were interested in buying a DELL Inspiron

last

week. I just wanted to let you know that I’ve decided to sell my laptop. I bought my DELL Inspiron laptop 3 months ago, so it’s still in really good condition. The reason for selling it is that I just started work at Google and they have issued everyone in the RnD department free brand new ASUS Chrome books, which I think is much better for me, it

also

has more features for what I need to do. My DELL Inspiron has the new core i7 processor so it’s very fast, it’s

also

lightweight and has 13-hour battery life. It has a 17inch screen and an HD webcam. It contains the latest software

such

as Photoshop, Word, PowerPoint and Garage band. There are no scratches and it looks new. If you are still interested, I’m free

Monday morning June 11th 10 am,

also

Tuesday afternoon, June 12th, between 2 pm and 5 pm. Hope to hear from you soon. Regards Ray

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

183 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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